tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7950426400987776619.post7740619435457418423..comments2023-04-13T09:48:28.176+02:00Comments on The Giver: Jonas' Diary EntryUnknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7950426400987776619.post-91592112332883949132019-04-25T19:17:59.872+02:002019-04-25T19:17:59.872+02:00shnipsonshnipsonAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00361167535747207620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7950426400987776619.post-73585997243077350112011-03-27T16:56:15.254+02:002011-03-27T16:56:15.254+02:00Sarah, I like your diary entry for many reasons. Y...Sarah, I like your diary entry for many reasons. You choice of words show well what Jonas felt. I especially liked the idea that "minutes seemed to be hours" to him during the Ceremony. You really put a smile ON my face with this description.<br />I also liked the rhetorical question Jonas asks at the end of his entry- "How could I be wise? I am a Twelve! I do not have enough experience to be wise." It sounds a little wise to me, though... imagining that a twelve-year old boy writes this! Well done!!<br /><br />PS: "more sure" as the comparative of "sure" in BEEnglisch EF (Bru)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08524287681208619424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7950426400987776619.post-2944415589668163542011-03-26T18:36:29.587+01:002011-03-26T18:36:29.587+01:00There is a lot of really good work here. Not only ...There is a lot of really good work here. Not only knowledge of the text and insight into the character of Jonas, but also good language work. I especially like the section where you describe Jonas' feelings as his number is missed out.josmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17484790386347197410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7950426400987776619.post-71626462563222380112011-03-22T23:51:26.963+01:002011-03-22T23:51:26.963+01:00Dieser Kommentar wurde vom Autor entfernt.Englisch EF (Bru)https://www.blogger.com/profile/08524287681208619424noreply@blogger.com